Friday, September 13, 2013

Susy-Ann's Clock

Today,I am going to share about a very intresting story called Susy-Ann's Clock.Susy-Ann was a very lazy and slow girl.She was late for school,late for dinner,she was late for everything!!When people scold her for being late,she always blame her clock for going slow.When the clockheard what she says,it felt very angry.It is because the clock never did go late and it hate it when Susy-Ann say untruth things.I think that Susy-Ann really deserve a punishment.Lets continue back to the story,so as I say,the clock decided to punish Susy-Ann.Instead of being slowit decide to be fast.The next morning,the clock which was supposed to point at 7:20am-time for Susy-Ann to get up-it pointed at 8:00am.Just than,Susy-Ann woke up.She looked the clock and shouted,"It can't be 8:00 am!I'm going to be running late!"Without a moments' delay,she jumped out of the bed and dressed more quickly than she ever dressed before. She shot down the stairs.There was her mother preparing breakfast.She was surprised to see Susy-Ann.Her mother told her that it is not ever 8:00 and she is already here.Susy-Ann ran back again to her room and look at the time again.It was 10 minutes to eight.Her mother ask her to wash up,make her bed and come down to have breakfast.She did it slowly.A bolt from the blue, the clock struck nine.When Susy-Ann saw that it was 9:00am,she carry her bag and ran down the stairs and out the door without eating breakfast.She forgot to bring her pencil case and lunchbox.Susy-Ann ran as fast as her leg could carry to school.When she reached there,her friends were very surprised to see her there on time.At eleven o'clock,she was very hungry as she forgot to bring her lunchbox.It was finally one o'clock and it was time to go home.At two o'clock,she was surpossed to back to school again.When she reached home,she got to her room to put her bag down.Just as she was about to go down to have lunch,she saw that it was already five minutes to two.Again,she ran down the stairs and out the door without eating lunch.When she reached school,she saw six children eating lunch with a teacher."why are you so early?Its only barely 1:25 and you are already here.""But my clock show  2:00pm.."After saying,she ran home again."How naughty you are!"scolded Susy-Ann's mother. Susy-Ann was getting very angry with the clock for being fast.She pretended to be slow.The clock was very angry and became to  move faster."Caught you!Please forgive me Clock.I promised not to be slow anymore.""Well,I will be the samo clock again if you promised not to be slow again."From that day onward,Susy-Ann was not lazy and slow anymore.

1 comment:

  1. haha.....
    the story is interesting and I like the way you eexpress it, keep me reading to the end.
    You may want to consider to paragraph it nicely do that it is more structured and easy to read.

    Great, keep it up.
    daddy

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