Thursday, August 29, 2013
What I have done today in school
Today,after putting my bag at the hall,my friends and I went to the parade square to play.We had a whale of time playing.During recess,I also play with friends under the hot swealtering sun.Beads of perpiration ticked down our head as we were playing.At class,a relief tacher cami in.She allow us to sit in small groups.I was sitting with Jun Ning wher a letter was pass to us.Currosity got the better of us.We opened the letter and read it.It was from yhe evil Lynn.She wrote something bad!I feel like punching her!
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Your sentence structure need improvement. Try using comma, and, etc to connect and built a complete sentence.
ReplyDeleteSo, what did jun Ning write that make you so angry?
Not Jun Ning,but Lynn!She wrote i hate you to: jun ning and clarice!
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